please give me feedback.thx

Dear Please Check my designs
https://www.designcrowd.com/design/36231862
I hope you like them
Thank you

Hi There,
I’ve just submitted a design for your project (ID: #36234318).
It would mean a lot if you could take a look at the description, where I’ve shared the thoughts behind the concept.
I look forward to hearing your feedback!
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Best regards,
Ha.Connick

plz, take a look on my revisions Design Id #36362647
Thank you