Please check my design, send feedback to see if im in the right track

Hi Seenu,

Thankyou for your quick response. I had something slightly different in mind. I have attached two links to images I find inspiring due to simple but clear nature. Thanks.

https://www.google.com.au/search?q=cloud+logo+designs&biw=1680&bih=925&tbm=isch&tbo=u&source=univ&sa=X&ei=Q-XLU-zOIcy58gXt_YCgBw&ved=0CD4QsAQ#q=cloud+circuit+logo&tbm=isch&facrc=_&imgdii=_&imgrc=L8CWoI5m8WPHZM%253A%3BoAEzyFQwQYqHcM%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fthumb7.shutterstock.com%252Fdisplay_pic_with_logo%252F875032%252F140422561%252Fstock-vector-cloud-circuit-over-gray-background-vector-illustration-140422561.jpg%3Bhttp%253A%252F%252Fwww.shutterstock.com%252Fen%252Fcat.mhtml%253Fsimilar_photo_id%253D68152702%3B450%3B470

https://www.google.com.au/search?q=cloud+logo+designs&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ei=Q-XLU-zOIcy58gXt_YCgBw&ved=0CAYQ_AUoAQ&biw=1680&bih=925                                           

Can i have feedback on my proposal?
Design id: 4186233

Thank you

Shino