Feedback appreciated. We've got some time for adjustments, please let me know if this was the direction you were looking for. Thank you.

Hi, it looks very good. The pictures, the text and the colors go together very nicely. We are very flexible with our hours so maybe we could replace the 'Hours of Operation: ...' with something like 'Call Now To Make an Appointment'.
Thanks

will do :)

Please wait for our submissions, regards,

Hi,
I am working on your project, i kindly request you to wait till the deadline of the project.

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rkailas