I have kept it clean and simple to read, please comment, thanks

 Hi,
sent another option, looking for your feedback.
Thanks
Biswajit

Thanks very much. Not the right colours, need it to be mroe elegant. Thank you

wow lismore wyrallah road, i use to live there, small world 

hi,

I have revised design as per your feedback. I have sent two more designs.

Please give me your feedback.

thanks

Parul