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Greetings

Joe

Hello! I actually do really really love your design. So original. The only thing that's missing is that the subtitle is "Split Ends" because it is a series of three books called Hair AmErica...and the three separate books are called Split Ends, Rinse and Repeat, and The Last Tangle. Are you able to somehow fit "Split Ends" in there somewhere? I almost hate for you to touch it because it is so great how it is. Did you draw all the heads and faces?

Also, though I love the orange, can you try it with a pink/lavender color, too?

Thanks, again!

Erica

Any news?

Sorry for the delay. As much as I loved your design, I went with another designer. I showed yours another to friends and family, and most agreed on the other. Thank you for the time and effort you put into it. I truly appreciate it. I only just got around to selecting due to unforeseen issues on my end. x