Thanks for invite, I just submit my first proposal for your logo so, any feedback will be welcoming.

Hello designers. We are looking for a fun and bold logo to represent the Vietnamese Sub Sandwich Shop that we will be launching this year. The logo needs to target age 18-35. The designs we have received thus far have been more suited for a professional service firm or a dental office. Only one designer have met some of the details thus far. Please feel free to ask any questions regarding the brief. Thank you for all your efforts.

Dear Sir

Can you please provide me the honest feedback about my design? and also let me know is any changes are there for my design...?


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well being

Your design is too formal and doesn''t speak to our target market of 18-35. We want our brand to be fun and bold. The logo you have designed for us is better suited for a professional service not a Vietnamese Sub Shop. Thank you for your efforts.