Hello. Could you please provide me with feedback on my design?

Thanks Armin
sending it to rest of team to comment on. my initial view is that its perhaps too corporate looking, but you never know, rest might be ok with it. 

Ok, thanks, I'll try some new design!

one of the ideas the team had was a cityscape as a page, with lifted corner to reveal data... or cityscape as curtain being drawn back to reveal a different view..... maybe too literal though and wont visualise well... ??!! thanks again. will send through to other and get back to you