Contemporary Clothing Boutique script logo

This is what Penelope's was looking for in their logo design

We are a men's and women's boutique looking for contemporary script (cursive) logo ideas. We would like it to be simple, clean and a bit playful. Not too perfect, but not too messy. We imagine it to be black or dark grey, but are open to other ideas. Here are some we have seen and what we do/do not like about them: Pintrest.com (a little too perfect), builtbywendy.com (good, maybe a bit feminine for our needs), robertaspizza.com (I like this one, maybe a bit messy). Read more