feedback please. thanks

Hey there,

I'd love to chat more about this project. Can you review my submission (Design #12425244) and message me with any alterations or revisions you'd like.

Talk soon,
Shane

Hi Shane,

thanks for the design. It's not quite what I'm looking for, but like the stretched L to signal endurance and the package mop up. I'd be quite intersted to see something with a symbol or another take on the lettering that could symbolise endurance and determination. Plaay on the letters included, such as the O in some sense. Also, don't want something too bold in terms of the typeface. It reminds me of whey powders which i don;t really want to be associated wiith.

Probably not that clear, but hope it helps somewhat.

feedback please