feedback me on my submitted design 29552452 and 29552453 , thanks

hello sir,
please check my design, #29553098.
thanks and regards.

Reviewing all designs now, will provide feedback.
Thank you all so much who has sent in a design!

Looking forward to your valuable feedback, Thank you!

Hey Everyone, First I want to Thank you all for your submissions, they are all really good and it's going to be a hard decision to pick from.
I am sorry for not getting back to everyone sooner, as I have been really busy today. I am just sitting down to review all the new designs. I will be getting back to everyone whom has messaged me and to all the new submissions.

feedback please!

hello sir, please check my update design #29584508, and #29584509 and let me know your thinking. thanks

Please check designs #29560328 and #29553388. Please leave comments, suggestions and feedback. This means a lot to us, so that we are motivated to creation. Thank you